Pitch for print products

Link to Presentation : http://app.emaze.com/@AQWIWRC/research--planning

Feedback Evaluation

The feedback that we received was that we should make small minor changes to each of these scenes. Th main points that were picked up on was to make sure that the dialogue can be heard when the mum is talking. Also to make sure that we cut in a little bit where Nathan is walking into the camera. We were also told that Nathans mum is seen to be a little blurry at the start. This is something that we cannot change. We can now work on the music, make scenes lighter, and fade in and out.

Research & Planning

New Version of Treatment

Here is our edited and final version of our pitch: 

Our Pitch and Focus Group

This is our first pitch and below is our focus group which has been filmed.