Tuesday, 30 September 2014

Change of Location

Originally, myself and my group chose the location 'Regents Park Canal'. When choosing a location you have to carry out a recce and travel back and forth whilst filming. Taking this all into consideration we have decided to change our location as Regents Park Canal would be difficult for us to travel to as we have assessed the time it will take to get there and back and also it is a difficult location to film in.

Due to this, we have decided to change our location to The Olympic Park Canal which also has a bridge which we need. This location is suitable for us because our other location is in Stratford so if we need to re film any scenes it is easy for us to get to the other location. It will also be easier for us to go back and forth and the distance between each is only 10 minutes. 

We will soon visit the locations and produce a recce on them. 

Monday, 22 September 2014

Reason for Suicide- Idea

For our film, we have created a WhatsApp group s that if we have any ideas we can console one another. We have now come up with an idea for the reason behind the attempted suicide.
Below are screen shots of what was spoken about in the group chat. 

 



 


New Version of Treatment

Here is our edited and final version of our pitch: 





Saturday, 20 September 2014

Evaluation and Feedback


Pre Production Audience Feedback on our idea and treatment: 

Overall, the class liked our idea and we did get positive feedback. However, we were told to consider lighting as filming at night may become an issue and cause problems. Also, we were told to stick to a simple idea and not over complicate the story. 

After pitching our idea to the class we have come to a conclusion of of what the reason of suicide will be be after discussing it and getting feedback. Out of the five reasons, we have narrowed it down to two. These are: Anxiety and Guilt. We are thinking to combine these two together. 

We now have to plan where we will be filming and what characters we need to play a part in our short film.

We will all implement from these action points. As a group we have to choose one location out of the two locations ( Regents Canal/ Olympic Park Canal ) and we now need to plan the times that we will film as it is clear that we cannot film at night as viewing may become difficult if we alter camera setting and there may be a risk of grainy recordings. 

The focus group was very useful as we got to ask the class about what reason we should decide on, when we put it to a vote guilt and anxiety got the most votes. This really helped us to stick to one decision. We also got opinions on what the reason for guilt should be, the reasons varied from witnessing something the could've stopped, to letting something happen to a family member, and to letting a team down. We need to discuss what the final reason should be. 

Wednesday, 17 September 2014

Our Pitch and Focus Group



This is our first pitch and below is our focus group which has been filmed.


Tuesday, 16 September 2014

Treatment second draft

Improvements to first draft:

Narrative Idea:
We have changed our idea a little as we want to make sure that it is not prolonged and to build up suspense. Whilst our actor is walking towards the bridge we want to keeping cutting to a flashback to explain why he is in that situation rather than having the flashback when he is at the bridge. We have chosen to change it to this as we think it will make the film look better overall and whilst he is walking towards the bridge it will look like he is constantly thinking about what is wrong with his life.

Audience:
Previously we stated that our target audience will be 15-21 year olds. We have now discussed it and think that it would be better to change it to an older audience as it would be best suited to 18-23 year olds due to the reason of the suspected suicide.

Reasons for suicide:
We have a few reasons in mind that we will discuss with the class during our pitch to get feedback and their opinions. The reasons include:

*Alcohol Abuse- Alcoholic
*Illegal Drug Abuse- Youth Suicide
*Eating Disorder
*Guilt- may have seen something but wasn't able to help
*Anxiety

We have chosen these ideas because we think that they aren't highlighted enough and especially within males. We also want to create a subtle idea for the suicide attempt as we want to keep away from cliché ideas such as 'family abuse' or 'family problems at home'.


Monday, 15 September 2014

Prezi on case studies- After Feedback

Below I have created a Prezi showing the 3 ideas that I have taken from the 3 case studies previously analysed. After getting feedback from my teachers I was told to create a short presentation highlighting what points we have taken from each of the case studies and what we will incorporate in our film. 


Treatment First Draft

Classification/ Genre: Drama 

Short Summary: This short film will highlight a suicide attempt. We will have our main character standing on a bridge jus thinking before they plan to take their own life. The film will feature flashbacks of his life- outlining the reasons why he wants to end his life. Due to problems at home, and social problems. (Friends)

Inspiration: The inspiration for this film came from the short film that I watched on Youtube called 'That Girl That Lived'. This film shows how schizophrenia can affect a persons mind set which can affect a persons minds set and lead to suicide.
 Myself and my group also watched another short film on Youtube called 'Crooked Film' starring J Cole. The film has many different camera shots and effects that would be useful in our film such as slow motion and mid shots. 







Our idea is different because we haven't focused on a mental illness, but how everyday situations can still affect a persons mind set.

Audience: 15-21 we have chosen this target audience because our main actor will be Nathan from our group who is 17 years old. He is a teenager so we think that by having that audience age would be better as they can connect/relate more to the film.

Length: We will stick to the brief and keep the short film no longer that 5 minutes.

Logistics and Feasibility:
Equipment: may need lights if filming gets delayed and if it gets dark. We need a tripod to ensure some shots are filmed properly without a shaky camera.
Locations: someone's home to film family scenes. A friends house/park to film social situation/problem. Olympic Park Canal OR Regents Canal- with a bridge.
Actors: main actor- Nathan- Male- 17 years old - Casual clothing, jeans, tshirt, trainers.
             *Family- brothers, sisters? Mum, Dad? Girlfriend?

Ethical Issues: copyright of music, permission to film

Distribution: YouTube, Social Media such as Twitter and Facebook and our individual Bloggers.




Wednesday, 10 September 2014

Analysing three short films



FILM 1-Case Study One




TITLE: Think For Yourself       DIRECTOR: not stated        DATE: On YouTube: 10th April 2013

SYNOPSIS OF THE FILM AND THE EXTRACT I HAVE CHOSEN: I have chosen an extract which focuses on the stereotypical mind of people in society today. It is a form of discrimination as in this film the man with Islamic clothing on is thought of to be a criminal and someone who will do harm to others around him whereas the other character who is dressed in a suit and coat is seen to be someone who is portrayed as ‘normal’. The opposite then happens, the woman who thought that the Muslim man was a criminal is shown that it is in fact the other man who is the criminal as he is carrying drugs and the Muslim man is innocent and he is shown to be friendly and caring as he greets his children.  

NARRATIVE STRUCTURE: Linear

HOW ARE THE CHARACTERS REPRESENTED? : Character one who is the Muslim man is represented at the start to be someone who is hiding something and needs to get to his destination as he has a bag in his hand which is held across his shoulder. He is then represented as a kind a loving man as he helps his daughter with her scooter and then he is seen walking with his family. The other man is represented as a business man who is minding his own business but as soon as the undercover police arrive he is shown to be the real criminal, his dress sense is quite deceiving. The other character in this short film who speculates everything is a woman who is dressed in casual clothes for a winter’s day with a coat and she is walking alongside her daughter who is seen to be 4 years old. She is represented as a typical stereotypical woman.

USE OF CAMERA: At the start of this film we are shown a long shot which shows us the businessman walking, this allows us to see his clothing and what he looks like as he walks down the path whilst looking around. The next shot is an upper body shot which shows the woman and her daughter walking. We are then shown a long shot of the Muslim man walking which allows us to see his clothing and the bag he is holding in his hand. We are then shown a close up of the woman as she looks across to the man and starts to think all sorts of things in her head. There is then a close up of the man’s bag which allows us to think that the woman think the man has something suspicious in the bag. As he looks at her the extreme close up shows us the fear in her eyes as she stops and watches him walk. The medium close up shows the woman look back as she hears something and the long shot shows us the police running out of their car. We can now imagine what the woman thinks; the police are here for the Muslim man. The upper body and long shots show us the woman holding her daughter close to her and the Muslim man walking casually as nothing is bothering him, not even the sound of the police running up behind him. We are then shown a close up of the other man as he looks back and starts running as he is the real criminal. The medium close ups show us the scene of the man being held by a passer-by and the police catching up with him. We are then shown the medium close up of the woman as she comes to realise that she thought the wrong man was the criminal and she had it all wrong.

USE OF EDITING: The cutting on action is quite a slow pace and there are many focus pulls in the scenes. When the woman looks at the Muslim man in fear the focus is pulled and we can see the man as she sees him, she is then blurred out. The shot reverse shots show us the man and the woman constantly. Almost all of the editing is done in slow motion to show each characters emotion and to show the surroundings.

MISE EN SCENE: The area that this is shot in is a very empty place and the only people in this film are in the location. There are no passer-by’s apart from one man. The fact that there is no other person walking by the attention is focused more on the woman and how she is speculating in her mind.

SOUND: There is only non-diegetic sound that is used in this short film. As there is more drama involved, the volume increases.

TARGET AUDIENCE: The target audience for this short film is 16-25 year olds.



WHAT IDEAS COULD YOU USE IN YOUR OWN SHORT FILM? : Based on this short film the ideas that I could use in my own short film is that I could try to edit some scenes so they are in slow motion to show different parts of someone's life or show how while everyone is rustling and bustling in the city there are still major things that are happening. 
Logistics & Feasibility: 
In terms of actors we could make it really stereotypical as this will make the audience talk and maybe even relate to the film. For example, Muslim's are shown in a bad light due to certain people. If we incorporated this into our film then it would be much more realistic. 
In terms of location we would once again film in a popular location and this will add to the fact that even if you think an area is multicultural there will still be racism/stereotypical people who are not open minded and who do not understand that not everyone is the same. 
We would also have to make sure that people knew that we were filming as if they didn't some may try to intervene. 



FILM 2- Case Study Two




  TITLE: So Unfair      DIRECTOR: Andres Almarza     DATE: On YouTube: 25th November 2012

SYNOPSIS OF THE FILM AND THE EXTRACT I HAVE CHOSEN: This film is based on discrimination in the work place due to race. In the film there is a man and a woman who have applied for the same job role. The woman is an American who is from a 100% Caucasian family while the man is also an American but comes from a 100% Hispanic family. Due to this he is denied the job while the woman is accepted for the job. I have chosen this extract as it comes under the theme of discrimination but it is shown in a different way. In this case, in the workplace.

NARRATIVE STRUCTURE: Linear

HOW ARE THE CHARACTERS REPRESENTED? : In the film the woman who owns the company is represented as a strong firm woman who came make decisions but she bases them on her own belief system. She is very biased when making a decision. The man who is Hispanic is seen as a genuinely nice guy who is baffled by the decision of the employer. The Caucasian woman is seen to be confident but she gets away with being a unworthy candidate. The receptionist is also seen to be quite one sided when it comes to being nice to interviewees.

USE OF CAMERA: The long shot shows us the arrival of two cars in the car park in front of the work place. The medium close up shows as what the woman looks like and the same with the man. The long shot shows us that they are both equal before they have entered the interview room. The long shot them shows us the next woman who is the employer. She quite happily greets the Caucasian woman and takes her into the interviewing room. The over the shoulder shots show the conversation between the two women as general conversation is exchanged. The close ups show us that the woman is very informal as she has her hand to her face when she is talking and as she gets her coffee she stops talking and then realises that she is being spoken to. The employer however still considers her. The extreme close up shows us that the woman’s CV is not up to a good standard and her excuses are completely overlooked. The long shot then shows us the woman walking out of the office with a smile on her face, pleased with herself. We are then shown a medium close up of the man who smiles at the woman but she takes no notice. The long shot once again shows us the employer walking towards the next interviewee who is the Hispanic man. She doesn't shake his hand which shows us that she clearly has a problem from the first moment. Again, the over the shoulder shots show us the conversation between the two. The extreme close up of the computer screen shows us the CV of the man and we can clearly see that he has many years of experience and he has graduated from many places. This shows us that he is a strong candidate unlike the other woman. There is then an exchange of words at the long shot shows us the man walking out of the office, while he says goodbye to the receptionist she doesn't even look at him.

USE OF EDITING: Whilst moving from scene to scene the cutting on action is in quite a slow pace. The use of focus pull is quite clear to us as we can see the two candidates in the seating area one by one. The shot reverse shots show us the conversation between the two.

MISE EN SCENE: The location of the short film is set in an office with quite dull colours. There is a seating area and an office room where interviews take place. The main equipment used and needed is the desk and the computer on which the CVs are being read.

SOUND: The short film starts off with non-diegetic sound and then changes to diegetic sound of the employer greeting the first interviewee who is the woman. Throughout their conversation the non-diegetic sound starts in the background.  The diegetic sound is exchanged again when the receptionist says ‘have a nice day’ to the woman. The diegetic sound continues throughout until the interviews end and the non-diegetic sound appears much clearer until it fades out.

TARGET AUDIENCE: The target audience for this is adults who may have experienced this type of discrimination whilst applying for a job, I would say 25+

WHAT IDEAS COULD YOU USE IN YOUR OWN SHORT FILM? : Based on this film the ideas that I could use in my own short film could be showing two different people in the same place but at different times rather than at the same time. 
Logistics & Feasibility:
This idea could potentially be seen as something boring. We would have to make sure that the reasons for discrimination were quite controversial in order to create a discussion and to make people more interested in the film. 
In terms of actors we could get two completely different actors who are worlds apart. Or we could get two different actors who looked pretty much the same but they couldn't be more different. We would also have to consider the location and not make it the same as this film. Instead of discrimination in the workplace, we could film discrimination at school between a teacher and pupils are in a social setting. 


FILM 3- Case Study Three 



TITLE: The Girl that lived  DIRECTOR: Holly Streetter  DATE: On YouTube: 30th Dec 2013

SYNOPSIS OF THE FILM AND THE EXTRACT I HAVE CHOSEN: I have chosen this extract which deals with the problem of Schizophrenia and Suicide. The reason why I have chosen this film is because my short film may be based on a mental illness. I am yet to discuss this idea further with my group. This film is about a girl who is very much normal at the start but then something triggers her thought pattern and she changes. It then shows how the mental illness Schizophrenia affects her everyday life and how this illness can lead to suicide.

NARRATIVE STRUCTURE: Linear and retrospective 

HOW ARE THE CHARACTERS REPRESENTED? : The characters in this film are represented as normal people who go about their everyday life. There is only one main character who is dresses in a very causal way, like a normal teenager. The second character who is shown at the end is the girls mother who is also dressed normally for a winters day.

USE OF CAMERA: The use of camera in this film is good as there are many over the shoulder shots and there are shots where the camera is moving which makes us feel as if we are the character and shows us the view from her point and how she sees everything. There are also extreme close ups to show the emotion on the girls face as she deals with the voices in her head. Full body shots show us her clothing and how she dresses and how the Schizophrenia kicks in and makes her appearance seem very different to the start of the film. The birds eye view is also a good camera shot towards the end of the film because it shows us the location and we can see the important part of the film. Also the mid shots are very good as there are many in this film and once again show us the actions of the girl who is dealing with Schizophrenia.

USE OF EDITING: The editing used in this film is the cut on action. In some parts of the film the cut on action is quite fast which shows how her mind must be, going from a normal pace to a very fast past as her thinking rapidly increases. We are also a very slow cut on action as her thinking sometimes slows down.


MISE EN SCENE: The mise en scene is the way that the character is dressed. At the start of the film she is very formally dresses and she has a normal routine as she is running late and we can see that she's in a hurry to get to work. We then see that once she changes and the Schizophrenia kicks in her outfits change. She starts to dress casually and then she starts to look scruffy as her hair is all over the place in certain shots. The location goes from her house to empty estates to empty parks and finally a bridge. That is where she jumps ff and commits suicide. At the end of the film we are show flowers that have been laid down for her on the bridge and we are shown a teddy which shows that although she was grown up and shown as a teenager she was still a child in her mothers eyes. The book is a main prop as the book that's named 'The Girl that lived' is featured at the start of the film is the book that makes her change in the first place. At the end her mother picks up the book and we can see that the story will repeat.

SOUND: The use of sound in this film is good. The non diagetic sound of the instrumental music plays in the start where writing then appears on the screen related to the film. The sound then changes to diagetic where we can hear the girl in the film talking. This continues throughout. We can also hear the non diagetic sound of a voice over in different parts of the film.


TARGET AUDIENCE: The target audience for this film are teenager aged 15 and above because I think that Schizophrenia can affect anyone at any age but it occurs mostly in teenagers. I also think that this short film could be aimed at parents as a reminder that they should keep an eye on their children.


WHAT IDEAS COULD YOU USE IN YOUR OWN SHORT FILM?: Based on this film I think the ideas that I could use in my own film are the background music at the start of the film and the writing that comes up on the screen which is related to the film but directly aimed at the audience. I think that by doing that we are creating a relationship with the viewer and it keeps them engaged as they will take notice in what the film is really about and pay much more attention.

Logistics & Feasibility: 
We would have to make sure that this topic is portrayed in a sensitive light taking everything into consideration because a mental illness can be a very hard topic for certain people to talk about. In terms of locations, we would have to film it near a bridge or a canal but we would need to ensure that all filming is done in a safe way as working from heights can be dangerous if the necessary precautions are not held. 

Group Work - Brainstorming Ideas

Today we brainstormed ideas as a group we have ruled out the idea about discrimination as we thought that it is a very common idea and can become quite a cliche. 

Below is the idea about Depression. 



The second idea was a suicide idea. I do like this ideas and the majority of the vote was for this idea. However I think that this idea could also become a cliche as went 'suicide' is mentioned people often think of a bridge. 



Ideas for a short film

IDEA 1

GENRE: Thriller

SYNOPSIS + WHAT MAKES IT DIFFERENT: The structure of this short film will be linear narrative. In this film there will be a main character who thinks that they are being followed or stalked by someone as they think that they can hear noises behind them. They are constantly looking back as they are conscious that they are being watched, however there is nobody there. The point of this film is to highlight that people in general subconsciously think that someone is there when they are alone when in fact it is their mind making them believe that. What makes it different is that there won’t actually be a stalker in the end, whereas in some films there is someone.

AUDIENCE: The audience of this film will be teens aged 14+

SIMILAR/COMPARABLE FILM EXAMPLE: A film that I can compare my idea is to ‘Single White Woman’ in this film it happens to be that the main character knows her stalker and doesn’t know what she has got herself into as she is the innocent party by allowing someone to rent a flat with her. Little does she know, her flatmate isn't who she claims to be. In this film she finds out that she has a stalker whereas with mine the person doesn't even have a stalker, they just think they do. Another film that I can compare my idea to the film ‘Scream’ the main character is being stalked by phone calls and having people closest to them killed in front of their very eyes. All these films follow a similar theme of a ‘stalker’ but in mine there is shown to be a person acting as if they are being stalked.

LOGISTICS AND FEASIBILITY: The location of this film would be based in East London on normal back streets where people live or walk on to get to their home or the local supermarket. The time that this would be shot would be late at night to add more suspense to the film. The props would have to include a lot of lighting so that the people can be seen when filming in the evening when it tends to get quite dark. The actors for the film would be a male character as male characters are portrayed t be less scared of walking alone. This is how I want my film to stand out from other’s where the main character would normally be a female.

IDEA 2  

GENRE: Drama

SYNOPSIS + WHAT MAKES IT DIFFERENT: The idea for this short film is based on discrimination. I want to highlight what it is like to live in this society where people are of different cultures and races and how they are discriminated against in certain ways. For example, there could be someone who is discriminated against because of the colour of their skin and they may not fit in in an environment where people are all the same race. Or it could be if someone wears certain clothes that they are seen as an ‘extremist’ or a ‘goth’ or an ‘emo’ and how they are portrayed to be a negative person in today’s society.

AUDIENCE: The audience for this is 16+ as I think this is a broader issue which affects many people in different ways

SIMILAR/COMPARABLE FILM EXAMPLE: A similar film is ‘Shoot on sight’ in this film it is very clear that being a different religion is a big deal. The fact that the man is Muslim and he is dressed in Islamic clothes he is said to be a terrorist when he isn't and is wrongfully shot.

LOGISTICS AND FEASIBILITY: The location of this film will be in a very busy place at the time of rush hour as there are many people from all walks of life. This is helpful as it will show how someone can stand out from the crowd. I would have a main character who is of a different religion or race to play the main role.

IDEA 3

GENRE: Drama

SYNOPSIS + WHAT MAKES IT DIFFERENT: My third idea for a short film is someone who has had a serious accident and there life flashes before their eyes. The structure of this film will be retrospective. All the major events in her life will flash before her eyes and the things she wanted to do she didn’t do and I want to show that life is too short as there were many things she left unsaid. What makes it different is that there are many people who will come up with the same idea of possibly having someone’s life flash before their eyes however in this film I want to make sure I include all the aspects that people may not include for example showing parts of her life that she regrets. And regretting an action she did or didn’t take towards a particular thing/person.

AUDIENCE: Audience of this would be 18+

SIMILAR/COMPARABLE FILM EXAMPLE: A similar film is ‘Devil’ in one part of this film the storyline goes back into the past to tell the viewers what happened to a man who is now trapped in a lift with someone who is disguised as an old lady but is actually the Devil.


LOGISTICS AND FEASIBILITY: The location of this film will be set in a very dark place with an evening scene. Preferably the weather should be quite windy and rainy to create that cold effect. The props would be a knife if I chose to have the main character stabbed. I would have my character to be a girl who is dressed normally and who does not act suspicious so her murder is a real mystery. The location of this would be in a posh area or up London where you wouldn't think of such crimes to occur. 

Production Schedule

A2 MEDIA PRELIM BRIEF

This is the practice activity we received. To choose from a music video or short film. As myself and my group will be producing a short film we have followed the prelim brief for the short film. Below is the brief and the storyboard. 




The shot types we plan on using are shot reverse shots, close ups, mid shots and long shots. All of these shots will capture the facial expressions of each character and will show the conversation between the three characters. 




I think the video is good however it could be better. If the script was rehearsed then I think that it would sound better as some of the script doesn't make sense. Also I think that if the video was planned properly then it would present better. There are some good parts of film. I think that the good parts of the overall film are the fading effects when the film starts and when the film ends. I also think the credits at the end of the film are good as it gives a real feel to the final product. The close up shots have been filmed well and the over the shoulder shots. 

EVALUATION: 

Planning is a vital part of short film process. Originally our group of 3 including myself, we had planned the film and we booked a group room in the library to film. We also created a story board the briefly stated the different types of shots that we would use. On the day of filming one member was absent so we were paired up with another person. Towards the start of filming all members of both groups were present so we ended up forming a big group of 6. In terms of group work we all worked well together however there were some times where one person didn't have anything to do. This is because there were too many people in the group which wasn't necessary. However we had to make do with the circumstances. One member of the group filmed while myself and another member were in charge of sound. The remaining three members where the actors. We all managed to direct together stating where we though each person should be positioned and speaking up if we thought someone wasn't acting correctly according to the instruction we gave. As we altered some of the script to make it our own. The editing was done by one member of the group with the remaining 5 of us watching. The start and end in terms of fading start up screen and credits was done by me. 
In terms of strengths and weaknesses, I believe that our strength was managing to work together to create a decent version of 'The Breakfast Club' scene. We all contributed in the process of the film whether it be acting, filming, directing, editing, or sound. 
I believe that our weakness was that we took far too long filming as the script wasn't properly or fluently rehearsed which made us stop filming a number of times to look at the script. 

TARGETS TO IMPROVE 
* Make sure that the script is properly rehearsed even if I'm not the one acting, this will save time next time 

*Make sure that my group is here on time in order to avoid confusion and in order to make sure that the group doesn't expand 

*Make sure that everyone in the group has a part in editing the final film as there should be an equal contributed effort 

*Make sure that we use a variety of shots to make the short film better